Core Message Audit^TM Service

Take it from me, it stings when people aren’t as excited about your programs and services as you know they should be.

Because let’s be honest…

You know your stuff. You’ve got decades of wisdom. And you genuinely want to help people.

Yet somehow… things just aren’t popping.

If prospects aren’t responding to your offers, the problem probably isn’t you, or your product or service.

It might be (and I hate to say this)…

Your messaging.

But here’s the real issue:

If you don’t know where your messaging is breaking down, how can you fix it?

And if you’ve recently generated pages of AI copy… how do you separate what’s effective from what’s just polished-sounding fluff?

The Answer Is My Core Message Audit^TM Service

I’ll draw from my 30 years of experience and pinpoint how you can punch up your marketing messages so they grab your prospects and don’t let go. 

I’ll review current marketing materials, stuff like…

• Website copy
• Sales pages
• Video scripts
• Launch emails and landing pages

I’ll then compile a list of my observations (the good and the bad). 

Next, I’ll give you in-depth recommendations that detail how to make your marketing copy more compelling and persuasive.

What I Deliver

You’ll receive a custom 7- to 10-page document loaded with detailed suggestions for making your marketing content more enticing, “voicey,” and dynamic.  

My recommendations will be based on a 9-point evaluation that details how you can: 

1. Improve your headlines – Headlines are by far the most valuable real estate in marketing. I’ll make sure you’re not wasting this all-important space.

2. Make your copy more concise and customer-focused – To gain the respect of your prospects, your copy has to focus more on them, and less on you and your company.
   
3. Communicate your message through a distinct and unique VOICE –  I’ll help you nail down your authentic voice, and suggest how all your content can be written through it.
   
4. Write benefit-driven body copy that captivates prospects – I’ll help you create messages that illustrate the transformation you provide your prospects. 
5. Develop sharp, attention-getting bullet points – Benefit-driven bullets should read like a series of short powerful punches that pack a lot of heat.
   
6. Craft compelling copy that is inviting to the eye – If your copy doesn’t look fast and easy to get through, no one will read it. Presentation means everything.
   
7. Tell stories that capture and hold your prospects’ interest – Nothing grabs readers like good storytelling. I’ll show you how to use this powerful tool to energize your messaging.
   
8. Create call-to-action lines that are confident and commanding – Prospects are waiting for you to tell them what to do next. I’ll show you how to take full advantage of this. 
   
9. Build persuasive value demonstrations – I’ll detail secrets to writing copy that get prospects to focus on the value and quality you provide. Instead of the price you charge.
   

PLUS, your package includes a one-hour Zoom call during which we’ll discuss the recommendations I make in your Core Message Audit™. 

Your package price is $1,995. 

Again, this includes 7 to 10 pages of detailed messaging recommendations — and a one-hour Zoom consultation call.